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Nia ([personal profile] nianeyna) wrote2007-07-26 12:34 am

The Fic, It Marcheth Ever Onward

Title: Apricot Brandy
Author: [personal profile] nianeyna
Characters/Pairings: Fitz/Fool, Fitz/Molly, Dutiful, Kettricken
Genre: futurefic, angst
A/N: So, I dug another one of these out of my notebook for y'all. And, um, I'm not going to say anything else except that when it comes to Hobbdom I seem to be constitutionally incapable of writing anything longer than 500 words. That is all. Have fic.

This fic has been moved! It is now at AO3.

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
*sniffle* Aww... Fitzy misses his Fool.
I love the way you write their relationship, good jod ^_^

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

And of course Fitz misses his Fool. He's in his study right now, looking at that figurine the Fool made him and moping. And who can blame him? If I had a Fool, I'd miss him too. ;D

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
oh, thanks for making me cry!!! I can't believe how great this is! I had to read it again and again to just to take it all in, I'm not leaving any of this story behind!!

Thanks so much for posting this! I love the fact that you made such a small gesture on the fool's part such a vivid memory to Fitz. It usually is small things that set the mind off! Thanks again!

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I made you cry? *blushes*

I'm so flattered that you would take the time to reread this; it makes me feel better about my own obsessive nitpicking. XD Thanks for reading, and for the review!


[identity profile] 2007-07-26 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww..!! I love this so much!! Definitely loving the fact there's been more fic posted lately XD

I loved how you wrote this too - it's short but so evocative. I could really imagine Fitz choking and for a sec I was worried he was dying.. eek!!

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, no, I wouldn't kill off Fitz! Well... okay, so I might. But certainly not by having him choke to death on apricot brandy, that would be awful.

I'm pretty pleased about the upswing in fic as well ;D Fandom forever!

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it. Love the confused POV of Molly and Dutiful, and Fitz's reaction to the brandy *sniffle*

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
What? Confused POV? I didn't mean for that to happen! *is worried* It was definitely supposed to be Molly's POV... but if you liked it, then I guess it's good. XD Sometimes accidental effects can be the best ones! Er. Thanks for the comment!

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Ironically, I think I'm just being confusing XD

I meant I like the confusion of Molly and Dutiful because they have no idea what's going on, whereas we the readers do. If that makes more sense? :)

[identity profile] 2007-07-27 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
OH! Right. That does make more sense... and yes, they are confused. Although at the same time, they're kind of used to this. You know.

DUTIFUL: O.o What the crap?

MOLLY: *sigh* There he goes again. You know, he was always like this. Even when we were children - moody, you know... *remnisces*

And here I was, trying to figure out where it looked like Dutiful's POV

[identity profile] 2007-07-26 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, heartbreaking... *sigh*

[identity profile] 2007-07-27 05:03 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2007-07-27 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)

That is my comment for now. This produced such a stab of emotion, really, I can't respond coherently right now.

(Except maybe: ILU.)

Permission to add to the fic list? ♥

[identity profile] 2007-07-27 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! I have produced incoherence! *victory dance* Ahem. I mean... thank you.

Permission very much granted for the fic list. Really, you don't have to ask. <3

By the way, how do you make those solid hearts? I am puzzled by this.

[identity profile] 2007-07-27 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
By the way, how do you make those solid hearts?

& h e a r t s ;

Sans spaces. :D

[identity profile] 2007-07-28 05:55 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2007-08-11 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Gah... there totally went my brain.

Gah. I'm going to go cry now, m'kay?

[identity profile] 2007-08-14 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay. :)

[identity profile] 2007-10-03 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, this was good! You realize I am going to be forced to stalk your fic now? Because it's awesome!

BTW...guess who I am? (Hint: You know me and consider me completely, utterly insane.)

[identity profile] 2007-10-04 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
You! You awesome person you. You finally have an lj account! Anyway, you are welcome to stalk my fic, although there isn't all that much of it, to be honest ;D. Also thank you for the compliment; it means a lot to me.


[identity profile] 2010-08-16 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
That was fan-effing-tastic. A glimpse of Fitz's love for Fool through the eyes of another, unknowingly.

And may I just say that I had no idea there were so many forbidden-Hobb-fic readers! Nor a 'master list'. I've truly been living in the dark for the past six months.

[identity profile] 2010-08-16 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you. :D I'm glad you enjoyed the Molly POV.

The masterlist is the brainchild of [ profile] miarr, who is awesome. It's far from comprehensive, I'm sure - Hobb fanficcers tend to be rather secretive and isolated from each other, as you've noticed. >.< Still, nice huh?


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